“Tales from the Pit” #320a - I’m doing some market research today. Which one do you like better?
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pondershuffle likes this
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pricked-by-a-rose said:
This one.
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necrogenesis said:
The one with less text is better.
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baomon said:
this one (320a) is better. Does that mean you’re getting of flavortext?
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rahzark said:
This one is better.
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altarc138 likes this
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theanansi likes this
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axxle said:
This one.
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psrex likes this
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irandrura likes this
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luminumcan said:
This one by far. The additional text doesn’t add anything to the joke.
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goibon said:
This one. The other one made me think and read more. This one got the point.
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pepinismo likes this
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sadfacts said:
this one, not close
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avatarjk137 likes this
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derobim said:
This.
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senorbaguette likes this
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cipher-x said:
This one. Less is more.
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jonney likes this
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leadnic likes this
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donoterase said:
This one.
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ricardolongo said:
This one, not close. Some of the comics really could use a bit more subtlety - no need to flat out explain everything. Trust us, we’ll get it!
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octhilias said:
This one is much better. Faster, cleaner, hits the punchline and stops. The other dialogue is funny, but doesn’t add enough to justify the extra words/space.
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signosmisteriosos likes this
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miraika likes this
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orbitalplatypus said:
I like this one better. Cleaner design. I didn’t think the extra conversation added enough to justify the clutter.
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gislejohan likes this
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tnessfftto said:
NOOOOOOOOO! 320 was better! It had meta-humor! And a bonus joke!
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ghosturza likes this
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dukkhasatva said:
This one
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mimitchi86 said:
The second one is better. The first one is funny too, but I feel like the first one could stand on its own as a caption for a different picture.
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steinlockchen likes this
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gentilico said:
This one, definitely.
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mrwilsonuk said:
Definitely the “no second caption” version. Feels like we’d already got the joke and then the second caption was pretty much “repeating and explaining the joke”.
I do agree that this feels like an article setup though :p
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cryptrat said:
I prefer, “Target player, give me another quarter.”
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naftman said:
this one
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xephyron said:
I prefer 320a. 320 could have been fine, except that the caption added almost nothing to the joke that couldn’t be inferred. However, I suspect you already know this and are writing a column for Monday about being succinct.
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redkutai said:
I’ll have to vote for this one as well; much more elegant…
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jarjarthejedi said:
This one. The ‘give me a quarter’ line is a better ending joke.
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luposegreto likes this
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tom3dc said:
320A seems more simple & elegant. But 320 gives more insight. If I had to vote between these two I would vote 320A.
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space-matra said:
I liked this one, 320a, better. It’s a lot simpler than the other one.
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luposegreto said:
This one is better ,imho the less you say the better it is
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jonesmadeatumblr said:
I like 320a better. Understated is better than overstated.
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